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it's a prototype test-thing
i hope this works
hahahaha

edit- please do not kill me this is my first flash and i had to make it in a few hours and i dunno what i was doing

accessory suggestions would be appreciated

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Vision: So, this is the first game I have critiqued, so take that for what it is. I do, however, see some potential here.

Originality: Now, don't get me wrong when I say that there are a lot of dressup games on the internet, so yours can- and probably will- get lost in amongst them. My main gripe is the fact that there aren't all that many clothes to choose from, and that limits the replayability of it somewhat. Also, a snap-to feature would have been nice, just so that the clothes would cling to a certain area of Fluttershy's body instead of having to be manually lined up.

Technique: Technique is fine, if a little bit samey. The design on the clothes and on Fluttershy herself are great, and I do like the more artsy visual style. The background, howeveer, could use a bit more pizzazz. For the next version, maybe have it set in Carousel Boutique.

Impact: Like I said, there are a lot of these types of games floating around on the internest, so I can't honestly say that this will sticjk with me for long, mainly because it is your average, run-of-the-mill dressup game.

Overall: A good first step, if let down somewht by a lack of choices and a bit of a predictable saetup. I understand that this is just a prototype, so I am anxious to see what you do for the next version. Feel free to comment if you disagree, and check out my group #Equestrian-Archive if you get the chance.
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as of right now, it is put together really well. The drawing is a little bit on the choppy side. Might I suggest smoothing it out? Also, with some things, like the neck scarf, I couldn't figure out where to put it at first, so I was trying to figure out where to put it. I would make it look more like an actual scarf, rather than it looking like a leg warmer and just letting people just guess what it is.

With the socks, may I suggest putting a dent in the back where the back leg comes up? It seems a bit weird when you put them on because they cut off the back hoof.

On the plus side, it is turning out beautifully. I really wish people would make more of these. They're really fun and creative and you never see them. Your artwork is amazing and I can tel you have put a lot of effort into making this. I can't wait to see the finished product! I know it's gonna look amazing!
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forever1188123 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
say apple 3x
say ipod 5x
post this on two other games
and look under your pillow
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fluttershy7664 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute but not wat ima lookin for
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bunnaloosa Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
lol! fluttershys socks!
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Lovleydodo Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student Artist
ooooh sooo cute ^_^
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fixinman Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Impressive work.
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PkLove-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, but the final version is up! =)
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DJgirlrocks123 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
So fun!
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LizzieWasHere Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is your first one? wow by looking at it it look like its your 9 or 10th
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PkLove-Chan Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup, my first one. I'm not so experienced ^^;
I'm glad you feel that way!
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